Kamis, 11 Maret 2010

Cinderella Script ~ ancur2an

Drama Cinderella untuk tugas English sudah berlalu. Tidak ada salahnya gue berbagi naskah yg gue buat ini untuk kalian semua.....
Hope You Enjoy it


Cinderella

Characters :

  1. Dani as Narrator
  2. Riris as Cinderella
  3. Reza as Prince
  4. Dania as Stepmother
  5. Ajeng as Stepsister
  6. Rizky as Minister
  7. Nanda as Fairy God Father


Narrator :

Once upon a time, in a small house by the Kingdom there lived an unhappy girl. Her mother had dead. And her father got married with the cruel widow, Esme. Esme had a daughter, named Rosalie, who ugly inside and outside. They always made the unhappy girl suffering. Since the stepmother’s wickedness, the father dead. Now the poor little girl lived alone, just with her step mother and step sister. Since then, she felt more and more sad than before. Her life was as if lived in hell. That poor girl named Cinderella……..


Setting

Place : home

Time : morning


Esme : Cinderella!!!! Sweep the floor!! *shout*

Cinderella : yes, I have

Esme : clean the window!!!

Cinderella : I have, mom

Esme : iron the clothes? Wash the dishes? Watering the plant???

Cinderella : I have mom…..I’ve done them all

Esme : do them again!!!!! *scolding*

Cinderella : …….yes mom

Rosalie : Cinderelli!!!!!!

Cinderella : yes, wait a minute

Rosalie : Cinderelli!!!!!! *higher tone*

Cinderella : *sigh*


Narattor :

Like mother like daughter. Both Esme and Rosalie used to treat Cinderella unfairly. They always burdened Cinderella with all of the chores. In the contrary, Esme treated Rosalie very well. Full of loveliness, affection, and gave any home comfort for her. Cinderella was given only rags for clothing. No affection, no home comfort, just piles of household chores for her.

Someday the kingdom’s delegates sent a message which said………….


Place : Living Room

Time : Morning


Esme : “King Jacob will hold the ball in castle’s hall. Every maiden in the town are allowed to attend the ball. And whoever that can impress Prince Edward are allowed to dance with the Prince……Wear your most enchanted dress.”

Rosalie!!!!! Come here, honey!! I have good news for you…. Quick!

Rosalie : Mommy….i still drowsy…..

Esme : You sluggard….Look at this *throw the invitation card to the Rosalie’s face*

Rosalie : uugh……….*read the invitation card*……..W-w-w-what???? I-i have a chance to dance with Prince Edward!!!! Yeah!! *throw the card invitation to the air*

Esme : you’d be honored to get it all…hahaha *laugh* (you worthy to get that kind of honour)


Narator :

Meanwhile, Cinderella peeped on the opened door. She heard all of Esme and Rosalie’s conversation. She thought that she also could attend the ball, because she was neither of maiden in that town.


Cinderella : Mom, does it mean I can attend the ball too??

Esme : *look at Cinderella* hah???? You???? An ugly and clumsy girl dream about attending the ball and have a dance with the prince?? You Cinderella??? Haahahahahaha *evil laugh*

Rosalie : Cinderelli, my poor honey baby,,DO NOT EVER DREAM THAT YOU CAN ATTEND THE PARTY!!!!!!! *shout* do you? *almost whispering*

Esme and Rosalie : hahahahhaha

Esme : pathetic girl

Cinderella : *hold back the tears* …….but…I want to attend the party,,like the other girl in this town…..just like Rosalie…..*cry*

Esme : what????? But you won’t!!!! no dress, no party, no dance for you!!!

Rosalie : now, prepare my dress right away!!! I’ll wear it on the party this evening

Cinderella : ………….*sad*


Narrator :

What a pity Cinderella was, she wasn’t allowed to attend the ball. Whereas every lady in that town could attend the party and had enjoy. Besides Cinderella was very beautiful, even if she wore rags and dusty. Esme and Rosalie, were the contrary, although they wore the prettiest gown, they were still clumsy and ugly. They had no inner beauty like Cinderella had. And it always would be.

Meanwhile, Cinderella walked away from the living room and went to the warehouse. She cried in there. She made a wish that she could attend the party. Magically, the sparkling light appeared. An odd man with the magic wand in his hand came up. He was a Fairy God Father.


Place : Warehouse

Time : Evening


Cinderella : oh God, why these are happening to me?? *cried*

FairyGodFather : don’t worry my darling..The God had arrested your wishes

Cinderella : !!! *shocked* W-w-who is that??

FairyGodFather : I’m Fairy God Father, I already here to help you

Cinderella : indeed??? But who are you?? I mean….who?

FairyGodFather : oh my darling, no matter who I am. Now if you want to attend the ball, you have to bring me some stuff.

Cinderella : is it dreaming?? Ooh yes, it surely dreaming.

FairyGodFather : oh dear, you’re not dreaming. I’m talking with you and it’s reality. Ok, now bring me some stuff

Cinderella : W-w-what is that?

Fairy GodFather : a pumpkin and mice

Cinderella : wh-…… Oh okay


*Cinderella is collecting the stuffs to be given to the fairy*


Cinderella : this……all you want

FairyGodFather : pretty good. Now, you’ll see the miracle

Cinderella : but what will be happened with these all??

FairyGodFather : just waiting and keep your sight

*flick on the pumpkin and said…* ……

Cinderella : !!! oh my God *almost whispering*

FairyGodFather : that’s it

*flick on the mice and said…* …….

Cinderella : what a wonderful…


Narrator :

The pumpkin and mice turned into a sparkling cart and its coachman. It was so wonderful that Cinderella couldn’t believe her eyes.

FairyGodFather : now you can attend the party with these all

Cinderella : but……..*haven’t finished yet*

FairyGodFather : oh, no no no. don’t say thanks to me. You worthy to get it all honey *smiled*

Cinderella : oh, I don’t mean to…. I mean..how about my dress?

FairyGodFather : exactly!! *tap the head*

*flick Cinderella’s dress and said…*

And it will be perfect

*flick the magic wand in the air and made glass slipper appeared*

Cinderella : how beautiful!! It’s awesome………thank you

FairyGodFather : don’t mention it…..you’re so beautiful. Now you can go to the ball. But remember, the magic spell will end at midnight. So you must go leave the castle before late.

Cinderella : okay, I will



Asal anda tahu..si ibu / bapak peri di cerita Cinderella ini agak oon..
















Narrator :

Cinderella went to the ball by the cart. She still could not believe but very happy.

At the castle’s hall, every people’s sight keep an eye on Cinderella’s pace. They were hypnotized and mesmerized by Cinderella’s beauty, included the prince.

Place : Castle

Time : Evening

Esme&Rosalie : whoaaaa…*admired*

Rosalie : mommy,,there’s Prince Edward!! i have to seize his heart!


*approached Prince Edward, Esme followed*


Rosalie : oh,My Prince,Prince Edward, nice too see you *shake Prince’s hand*

Prince Edward : errrrrr….so do I *felt awkward*

Esme : you majesty, she is my daughter..she is beautiful, isn’t it.. so I think you should have dance with her, and I surely think that..

Rosalie : Look!! Who’s coming??

Whoaaaa…who’s that? She is so beautiful….*enchanted*

Esme : yes *whisper*…………hey!!! *conscious* you’re the beautiful one! Do you remember??? *slap Rosalie*

Rosalie : o-o-oh yes…absolutely


*suddenly Prince Edward approached Cinderella*


Prince Edward : you, beautiful lady, am I worthy to have dance with you?

Cinderella : that’s an honour


*Cinderella and Prince Edward were dancing romantically*





gak ada peran tikus, cuz there were no costumes...












While dancing…………..

Prince : you’re so beautiful..and grace. What’s your name, lady?

Cinderella : no matter who I am.

Prince : is that so?? But you surely beautiful. I’ve never seen the one like you in a life time. You’re the one who can make me…..fall in love.

Cinderella : *blush* really?*

Prince : absolutely, honey. I want to dance with you all night.


DING DONG DING DONG DING DONG DING DONG


Cinderella : oh gosh, it’s time for me to go! *leave the prince* *run*

Prince : hey,,w-wait!!Even I haven’t known your name,lady!! *chase after Cinderella*


*Cinderella slipped and either glass slipper was put off from her foot*


Narrator :

Cinderella run away from the castle. The cart and coachman had returned to the pumpkin and mice. Cinderella didn’t wear beautiful gown anymore. Just rags remained. But her glass slipper still remained just like the first time. Cinderella ran until she arrived at home

Meanwhile……..


Prince : Minister, tomorrow you must look for this glass slipper’s owner

Minister : Yes, you majesty

Prince : I gotta find her *talking to himself*


Narrator :

The next morning, the minister had surrounded the town to look for the glass slipper’s owner. She knocked door-to-door to find the girl that have the glass slipper. Eventually, the minister reached Cinderella’s house. How surprised Esme was. She didn’t ever think that she would be come by delegate from castle.


Esme : oh, minister! *shocked* what’s matter??

Minister : and you madam…?

Esme : Esme

Minister : Mrs. Esme, Prince Edward is looking for a lady that her foot fits with this glass slipper. Do you have daughter??

Esme : o-o-of course…..come in

Minister : thank you


Place : inside house


Esme : Rosalie!! Come here honey!! Look, who’s coming

Narrator :

Rosalie come down and surprised when was seeing the minister. The minister let Rosalie to fit the glass slipper. Rosalie was over glad that she was very confident if the glass slipper would fit on her foot.

Rosalie : come on, minister. Let’s put the glass slipper to my foot. It will be

perfect on my foot, ‘cause it was mine.

Minister : be patient madam, we’ll see……..

*Minister was trying to fit the glass slipper to Rosalie’s foot*

Minister : Uh oh.. I think it’s….not fit in your foot..miss

Rosalie : shut up!! i…..urgh…. it must be fit!! *forced*

Esme : ya, it will fit on your foot,darling…keep trying!

Rosalie : urggghhh….*trying harder*

Minister : stop! Stop before you crush it!!

Oh,madam I think your daughter doesn’t belong to this glass slipper. Do you only have one daughter?? I mean, is there any lady in this house??

Rosalie : u-u-uhh.. absolutely. I have only one daughter *lying*

Minister : is that so?mmhhh Okay, I gotta go now. Thanks

*move to leave Cinderella’s house*

Rosalie : NO!!! hold on! Try once again!!



Kagak ada sepatu kaca, sepatu sendal plastik pun jadi














Narrator :

Rosalie’s foot didn’t fit with the glass slipper because it obviously didn’t belong to her. In that time, Cinderella was in the kitchen. She didn’t know about Minister’s arrival. She was sweeping the floor and singing…….

*Cinderela singing* Trala lala lalla llallaaaaa…..


Minister : !!!! girl’s voice!? Ehem, madam. You said to me that there’s no lady in this house anymore. But that’s….??

Esme : o-of course!! It just…..mhhmhh….it just……..


*the minister had looking for the source of that voice and Esme didn’t realize*


Minister : aha! Prince Edward told me that every lady in this town worthy to try the glass slipper. So, what’s your name, miss??

Cinderella : umhhh…Cinderella *twitchy*

Minister : Miss Cinderella, let’s try to fit the glass slipper on your foot


*Minister and Cinderella came back to the living room*


Esme : why you bring that poor girl here, minister!!

Minister : okay, Miss Cinderella, sit down please. And let me fit this one for you

*didn’t care about Esme*

Esme : how dare you, Cinderella!!!! And minister…..*cut*

Minister : Quiet! Every girl in this town worthy for this

Esme : every girl but Cinderella!!!

Minister : every girl WITHOUT any expectation. Oh please, shut up!!!

Esme : how dare….how dare you! * raged* …….

Come on Rosalie!! Don’t stand in the corner like foolish!! We gotta leave this room!


*minister looked Esme for a while, then look away*


Minister : ok, this one…..and Oh my Lord! This is perfect. You’re that lady, who danced with the prince?

Cinderella : uhmmmm it can be said so *blushed* Actually I have the pair of that glass slipper *bring the other glass slipper and put it on*

Minister : Prince Edward will very happy


*suddenly the fairy god father came up*


POOPS!! *SFX*


FairyGodFather : Cinderella,my darling, you fair to get it all. You have inner beauty that every one have no.

Cinderella : oh,,Fairy God Father!! Oh, thank you. I will never like this without your help.

FairyGodFather : oh honey, don’t say thanks to me. It has been your fate. *smile*

And as the completing…..*flick the magic wand to Cinderella*

Cinderella : ohhhh…..


Narrator :

Fairy God Father change Cinderella clothes into beautiful dress. Cinderella was so beautiful in it. The Minister was enchanted, then invited Cinderella to meet Prince Edward in the Castle. Meanwhile the Fairy God Father disappeared.


Minister : oh, beautiful lady, Prince Edward is waiting for you in the castle. I bet he will be very happy to get someone like you *smiled*

Cinderella : oh, really? It’s too exaggerate *blush*

Minister : I bet, and it would be. Ok follow me.


Narrator :

The Minister brought Cinderella to the castle by cart. Meanwhile, Prince Edward was waiting for news. He wasn’t patient. Lastly, The Minister and Cinderella arrived at castle. How surprised and happy the Prince was. Ultimately he found the girl that he looked for.


Prince Edward : You, my beautiful girl. I’m so happy to meet you again. Have you ever minded that I can’t sleep cause I was always thinking of you?? Hey, I even haven’t known your name, my lady. So, what’s your name?

Cinderella : I’m Cinderella. I’m so happy that I you felt like I did..

Prince Edward : Cinderella, I’ve never seen someone who make me fallin’ in love but you.. would you marry me??

Cinderella : ohhh…yes..*nod head*..i’m so happy.


*Prince Edward put the ring onto Cinderella’s ring finger *


Prince Edward : I will always love you

Cinderella : and so will I..


*then they’re dancing full of love*


Narrator :

Prince Edward proposed Cinderella and Cinderella accepted. The Prince said that he would give eternal love to Cinderella, and Cinderella would too. And it always would be. Finally they lived happily ever after.



Created by M. Bagus Abdani S.





Dou desu ka?? Gimana???

Apakah gw uda sukses ngehancurin cerita aslinya??? Hahahaha


Yg pas bagian endingnya uda keliatan banget ge je (Gak Jelas) nya. I was out of idea.


Dan jika diperhatikan anda pasti bisa melihat nama-nama tokohnya :

Cinderella : uda biasa

Esme : tebak siapa hayoo??

Rosalie : masih belom bisa nebak??

Prince Edward : kalo ini juga masih belom bisa nebak, maka anda buka termasuk nerd atau golongan orang-orang sufi (suka film)


Gue ambil nama2 tokoh itu dari serial Twilight Saga.


Sengaja gue kasih nama (bukan sekedar mother, stepsister 1, stepsister 2) soalnya di scriptnya ntu ada adegan panggil2 nama. Kagak elit banget kan kalo si Mother manggil anaknya dengan : "Heh" atau "Ndes" atau "Nyet".

Plis deh...Bukan gue banget getoooh...


Sengaja gue cari nama2 kuno yang terlihat jahat yang pas banget ama nama2 di Twilight Saga. Tapi Esme, Rosalie, Edward bukan tokoh jahat kok. Protagonis malah.

Awalnya gue mo ngasih nama 'Carlisle' . Tapi pronounsationnya gue kagak tau :p

daripada beribet ngucapinnya mendingan cari aman aja.


Awalnya gue juga mo nge-type suara jamnya jadi :

RING DING DONG RING DING DONG


tapi kagak jadi..takut dianggap aneh ama temen2 XD

~asal tahu saja, itu adalah judul lagu korea yg dinyanyiin ama SHINEe~


so Fantastic Elastic...


PS : kalo butuh music buat dancingnya gue rekomendasikan : Can I Have This Dance? - High School Musical 3, bisa didonlot di sini . . . Atau Cinderella - Steven Curtis Chapman, donlot aja di sini.


Untuk yang Steven C.C. harus ada tokoh ayahnya..soalnya lagunya tentang si ayah dansa ama Cinderella.


Buat yang pengen dansa tapi g tahu caranya bisa liat di sini, or here, atau di click aja (music : Steven C.C.).

atau kalo uda profesional bisa liat di sini (music : HSM 3).


Happy Dancing :)


~so i dance with Cinderella, while she's here in my arm............................Cinderella - Steven Curtis Chapman






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